SENTENCED
WRITTEN BY: R.J. JENKINS
ILLUSTRATION BY: JOSHUA JACOBS
Picking Up The Pieces
…in which a life-long lover of books—and especially, sentences—
responds to ChatGPT’s answers to his questions about books—and especially, sentences
THE PROMPT
These sentences appear in Toni Morrison’s Beloved: “She is a friend of my mind. She gather me, man. The pieces I am, she gather them and give them back to me in all the right order.” In 150 words or fewer, tell me why this is such a good sequence of sentences.
CHATGPT’S RESPONSE
These sentences are extraordinary because they compress an entire psychology of healing into a few deceptively simple lines. Morrison uses the colloquial “She gather me, man” to collapse grammar and expose something more primal: the experience of being seen and reassembled by another person. The speaker’s fragmentation—”The pieces I am”—is not abstract; it’s bodily, emotional, historical. And yet the restoration offered is intimate and precise: she returns the pieces “in all the right order,” suggesting not just repair but a re-authoring of selfhood. The rhythm of the sentences mirrors this process: short, clipped assertions that accumulate into a fuller sense of a person reclaiming coherence. It’s a portrait of love as psychic architecture—someone who doesn’t complete you, but restores your ability to recognize yourself.
MY RESPONSE TO CHAT’S RESPONSE
Not only does Chat’s response capture exquisitely the literary critical aspects that make these sentences so compelling—speaker fragmentation, re-authoring of selfhood, grammatical enactment of narrative themes—but it also ends with a beautiful articulation of the work the sentences accomplish: “It’s a portrait of love as psychic architecture—someone who doesn’t complete you, but restores your ability to recognize yourself.” Smart and gorgeous in equal measure.
But the real reason these sentences work is because they give voice to an experience we’ve all had, and certainly to an experience I have had. When I read them—”She is a friend of my mind. She gather me, man…”—I feel something loosen in my chest, something warm, familiar, like a heartbeat. Because I know what that feels like. I have been gathered. You – you know who you are – have gathered me.
There have been times when I have felt scattered, shattered—quietly, privately coming apart in places, and no one else could see. I didn’t even know how many pieces there were, or how long I had been carrying them alone. And then you showed up, not with fixes, not with answers, but with this steady way of looking at me as though nothing about me was confusing or too much or wrong. You saw parts I had hidden, parts I had forgotten, parts I was certain were shameful and unlovable. You didn’t flinch. You didn’t turn away. You just held them with a kind of calm recognition, as if to say: I know who you are. Let’s gather you back together.
And then, somehow, without ever making a performance of it, you did. You handed my pieces back to me in an order that made sense again. You reminded me of my own shape, my own voice, my own worth. Through heartbreak, through fear, through those moments when the world felt unbearably heavy, you stayed. You kept seeing me, even when I couldn’t see myself.
There is a kind of love between friends that doesn’t ask for anything, doesn’t make demands or keep score; it restores. That’s what you’ve done for me: you restored me. A quiet, patient, steadfast collecting of all the scattered parts of me until I could finally stand in front of myself and recognize the person looking back.
Morrison’s words feel like they were written for us—not because they are beautiful, though they are, but because they speak the truth of what you have done for me. You gathered me. And in doing so, you gave me back to myself. Thank you, for everything.
R.J. Jenkins’ favorite local charity is the
Marion Literacy Council.
Learn more at marionliteracy.org